Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是Moonlight小組的組長，請根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員Tommy進行綜合素質(zhì)的評價，寫一份素質(zhì)報告。

Name	Tommy (一個十五歲的初三學(xué)生)
Characteristics	聰明、幽默、樂于助人
Hobbies	不僅喜歡看恐怖片而且喜歡看關(guān)于體育新聞的電視節(jié)目�？釔劾L畫，每次畫畫時都徜徉在色彩的世界里。
Study	自從本學(xué)期他把絕大部分精力投放到學(xué)習(xí)中，他取得了很大進步。
Dreams	希望能認(rèn)識來自世界各地的音樂家，參加游戲類節(jié)目，贏得大獎。
Problems	面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠。
Your suggestions	?? (根據(jù)實際情況提一兩點建議)…

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要求：1、表達清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；

2、要點必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不得出現(xiàn)真實班級、姓名等；

3、詞數(shù)：100詞左右。

Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight._____________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is a Junior three student and he is 15 years old. He is a clever, humour,diligent and generous boy. He is always ready to help others. He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news. Especially he is crazy about drawing.He has put his effort into study since this term and makes great progress. He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year. He wishes to know the musicians from all over the world.He won the prize for games.Recently, he is going to attend an exam. So he is under great pressure and can’t sleep well. So I think he should relax himself by listening to some light music. I think that will have some help.?

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對Tommy進行綜合素質(zhì)的評價，寫一份素質(zhì)報告。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Tommy is……，He not only likes……，but also likes……，He won……，So I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。