Question

【題目】 書面表達(dá)（共1題，滿分15分）

你叫李華，你的美國網(wǎng)友Tim寫信告訴你他下學(xué)期將以交換生的身份來廣州訪問學(xué)習(xí)，這是他第一次來華，他很擔(dān)心自己不能適應(yīng)廣州的生活。為了幫助他更好地了解廣州的文化，你打算邀請他暑假來廣州并寄宿到你們家。請你回信告訴他你的計(jì)劃。請根據(jù)下面的構(gòu)思圖來擬定你暑假招待Tim的計(jì)劃。

Dear Tim,

I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student. To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou, I

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Yours,

Li Hua

注意：

（1）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。）

（2）不得透漏學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評分。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tim,

I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student. To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou, I will show you around the places of interest in Guangzhou.They are very famous.We will drink the morning tea and taste the delicious food of Guangzhou.Let’s play Tai Chi together.And you can take a plan and do what you want to do in Guangzhou. I will help your wishes come true.

【解析】試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou, I will show you around the places of interest in Guangzhou.They are very famous.We will drink the morning tea and taste the delicious food of Guangzhou.等等。