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【題目】中國(guó)贏得2022年第二十四屆冬季奧林匹克運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的舉辦權(quán)，假如你叫王剛，你想在2022年做一名冬奧會(huì)的志愿者，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封推薦信給冬奧會(huì)組委會(huì)介紹自己的情況。

1. 個(gè)人情況：（1）陽(yáng)光中學(xué)九年級(jí)（2）班的班長(zhǎng)；

（2）愛(ài)好：讀書(shū)，讀書(shū)的感悟（至少兩點(diǎn)）；

（3）喜歡的顏色：自己發(fā)揮，并說(shuō)出喜歡的原因（至少兩點(diǎn)）；

2. 個(gè)人自薦條件：（1）自信：不害怕在全校面前演講，善于與他人打交道；

（2）辦事有條理；保持一切井井有條，從來(lái)不會(huì)忘記需要做的事情；

（3）樂(lè)于助人：（舉1-2個(gè)事例）

要求1.詞數(shù)100字左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。 2.必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。

Dear:

I’m very excited to hear that China has successfully bid for the success of the 2022 Winter Olympics. I’d like to be a volunteer for it.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

If you can agree with me , I will improve myself in all aspects(方面). I’m sure I will be an excellent volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Wang Gang

Answer 1

【答案】Dear:

I’m very excited to hear that China has successfully bid for the success of the 2022 Winter Olympics. I’d like to be a volunteer for it.I am very confident so I can do things well. I am often willing to help others when they are in trouble. My favourite color is green because green can make me feel comfortable. I like playing basketball and I have been chosen to the basketball team. But I spend too much time playing basketball. My parents are very strict with me and they don’t allow me to play basketball. I will communicate with my parents. I hope I can achieve a balance between study and hobbies.

If you can agree with me , I will improve myself in all aspects(方面). I’m sure I will be an excellent volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Wang Gang

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，我想在2022年做一名冬奧會(huì)的志愿者，寫(xiě)一封推薦信給冬奧會(huì)組委會(huì)介紹自己的情況。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’m very excited to hear that……，I’d like to……，My favourite color is……，I like…….，I will…….等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。