Question

【題目】假設(shè)你叫李明，你們學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)要選一名副主席，你想推薦Tom，并附帶了一張照片。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一封80詞左右的推薦信。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

姓名	Tom
照片描述	黃色T恤和藍(lán)色牛仔褲，因?yàn)辄S色……，藍(lán)色……(自由發(fā)揮兩點(diǎn))
特長	精通電腦，擅長演講
性格、品質(zhì)	自信、勤奮、謙虛、有條理、樂于助人
個(gè)人事跡	經(jīng)�；ê芏鄷r(shí)間組織課外活動(dòng)，從不介意為班級(jí)做額外的工作，總是盡最大努力幫助同學(xué)，深受同學(xué)們歡迎。

Dear Mr Wang，

I’m writing to recommend Tom as the new vice-chairperson of the Students’ Union.

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_________________________________________________________________________________________think Tom is the most suitable person to be the new vice-chairperson of the Students’ Union. I hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

I’m writing to recommend Tom as the new vice-chairperson of the Students’ Union. This is a photo of him. Look! He likes wearing a yellow T-shirt and blue jeans. Because yellow gives a feeling of lightness and hope .Blue shows that the person is calm. I think he has some strong qualities for this position. Tom is confident. He is good at making speeches. He also does well in computers.He is hard-working， modest and organized. He often spends lots of time organizing after-school activities. He is very helpful too. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us. I think Tom is the most suitable person to be the new vice-chairperson of the Students’ Union. I hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.如He often spends lots of time organizing after-school activities. He also does well in computers等，副詞also， always等及復(fù)合句的運(yùn)用使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。