據(jù)世界衛(wèi)生組織(WHO)統(tǒng)計(jì),每年有200萬(wàn)人死于吸煙,60萬(wàn)人死于二手煙。為此,我市規(guī)定,從今年3月1 日起,嚴(yán)禁在公共場(chǎng)所吸煙。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合圖片和下面所給要點(diǎn),以“Saying No to Smoking”為題,談?wù)勎鼰煹奈:Α?br />
1. 吸煙有害;
2. 吸煙導(dǎo)致咳嗽、肺癌等疾;
3. 吸煙影響青少年成長(zhǎng);
4. 二手煙同樣有害;
5. 你的態(tài)度:面對(duì)別人吸煙、給煙怎么辦?
注意:
1. 詞數(shù):80詞左右;標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2. 應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點(diǎn);可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫;
3. 參考詞匯:lung cancer肺癌; secondhand smoke二手煙。
Saying No to Smoking
According to the WHO,2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in our city in public places both inside and out from March 1 on .

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Saying No to Smoking
According to the WHO,2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in our city in  public places both inside and out from March 1 on .
As is shown in the picture, smoking is bad for people’s health. It may cause many diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, every of us should follow the law and say no to smoking.

試題分析:這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì),我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),主語(yǔ)是第一人稱,注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中正確使用比較形式,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚,沒(méi)有或基本沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤;書(shū)寫(xiě)工整;字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。
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