Question

【題目】（題文）好的環(huán)境能使我們高興和舒適，改善了環(huán)境就意味著改善我們的生活。平時(shí)我們應(yīng)該多種花草和樹，別亂扔垃圾，看見垃圾應(yīng)該把它扔進(jìn)垃圾箱；別隨地吐痰，購物時(shí)最好用布袋代替塑料袋，應(yīng)該記住3Rs，盡自己所能去保護(hù)環(huán)境，成為一個(gè)環(huán)保者。

根據(jù)以上信息，以＂How to Protect the Environment ＂為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Protect the Environment

Good environment can make people feel happy and comfortable. If we improve our environment, that will mean we can improve our living conditions. So the environment is important for all of us. I think we should do something we can to make our environment better. For example, we mustn’t throw rubbish here and there. If we find rubbish, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin. We should also plant more trees to make our planet green. What’s more, we mustn’t spit everywhere. While shopping, we’d better use cloth bags instead of plastic ones. We should remember 3Rs: Reduce, Reuse, Recycle and try our best to protect the environment to become a environmentalist. In this way, we can have a better and greener earth to live in.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。材料中給我們列出了這篇作文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，主要有三個(gè)，第一是開展這個(gè)活動(dòng)的目的，改善了環(huán)境就意味著改善我們的生活；第二是如何在生活中落實(shí)，這是主要的，也是寫作的核心；第三是自己對此的建議，成為一個(gè)環(huán)保者。故我們的這篇作文應(yīng)主要由這三個(gè)部分組成。環(huán)境問題是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的話題，在教材上也有涉及這方面的內(nèi)容，所以學(xué)生們在這方面的語言積累還是可以的。我們要做的就是使用正確的英語，將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，而且還要連貫，流暢。這就要使用一些好的短語和句型，注意語句之間的連接。寫這篇作文時(shí)應(yīng)主要使用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如be important for all of us，make our environment better，for example，here and there，pick it up，instead of，try our best，in this way等。而If we improve our environment, that will mean we can improve our living conditions. / I think we should do something we can to make our environment better./ If we find rubbish, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin.等多種從句的運(yùn)用更是為文章增色不少，是本篇習(xí)作的亮點(diǎn)。