Question

【題目】書面表達

根據(jù)下面一段文字，寫一篇介紹David的文章。

1 David于2000年12月出生于丹陽的一個小鎮(zhèn)，屬龍，他從小喜愛打籃球并且籃球打得好。他性格活潑，精力充沛，愛參加各種活動。他也很聰明，擅長數(shù)理化。他是班上的尖子生之一，但他很謙虛，從不炫耀，樂于助人。他心地善良，常捐錢捐物給需要的人。他受媽媽影響最大，他媽媽教育他要有愛心。他喜愛紅色，認為紅色使人易于采取行動，也認為紅色能給人帶來好運。

2他愛玩電腦游戲，并在星期天玩兩個小時。他認為他能平衡愛好和學習。

3他很自信，認為他只要努力沒有做不成的事。去年他被選為初三（一）班的班長。

4他夢想當一個像姚明一樣的偉大的籃球隊員。

詞數(shù)八十以上，可以發(fā)揮，但必須包含以上要點。

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Answer 1

【答案】

David was born in a small town, Danyang on December 2000.He was the dragon.When he was a child, he was fond of playing basketball and played basketball well. He is lively, and he loves to take part in activities. He is also very smart and good at math. He is one of the top students in the class, but he is very modest.He never shows off, and he is ready to help others. He is kind-hearted.He often donates money to people in need. He was affected by the mother, his mother taught him to love. He is fond of red.He thinks red can make a person easy to take action, and red can bring good luck.

He likes to play computer games, and he plays two hours on Sunday. He thinks he can balance the interests and learn.

He is very confident that he can try to do what he can do. Last year he was elected as the monitor of the class.He dreams of being a great basketball player like Yao Ming.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹David的情況，小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如He often donates money to people in need. He was affected by the mother, his mother taught him to love. He is fond of red.He thinks red can make a person easy to take action, and red can bring good luck等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。