Question

【題目】在學習緊張，壓力大的情況下，如何安排好自己的空閑時間（free time）更加顯得重要，每個人有度過自己空閑時間的不同方式，請以“ My Free Time”為題，寫一種或幾種你喜歡的度過空閑時間的方式。要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名或校名。2. 詞數(shù)為80~100。

Answer 1

【答案】My Free Time

I have lots of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school. I like basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and studybetter. I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while. I find it is a good way to relax myself. Of course , I help myparents with the housework at the weekends .I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends. We always have a good time.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文題材緊扣學生生活，學生有自我發(fā)揮的空間。動筆前要認真審題，深入挖掘話題內涵，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。行文時要注意人稱、時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文內容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結構組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復合句，文章思路清晰，自然流暢。同時，使用了一些常用的句式和短語，這為文章增色不少。