Question

【題目】假如你是李濤,收到遠(yuǎn)在美國(guó)的筆友Peter的電子郵件，請(qǐng)閱讀他的電子郵件，給他寫(xiě)一封回信，

幫助他解決煩惱。

要求：1.詞數(shù)在80～100詞之間。

所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容要積極、向上，能夠解決實(shí)際問(wèn)題。

3.字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，句型豐富，條理清晰，行文連貫。

ent soon.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am so glad to hear from you. But I’m sorry to hear that you are unhappy.

In your letter, you said you made a mistake and let your winning team lose

the game. You were afraid to your coach might kick you off. In fact, you

don’t be anxious .To begin with, you can talk with your coach and explain

to him that you want to win and you are sorry to make such a mistake.

You’ll work harder and do better than before. Secondly, you can say sorry

to teammates. You can also buy small gifts for them or invite them to have

dinner. I think your coach and your teammates will forgive you. Good luck

to you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Tao

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