Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你叫李華，你的英國筆友Jim得知你最近正在使用一款運動健身的手機app, 想了解它的功能。請根據以下要點給他寫一封郵件，對這款app的功能做簡單介紹。

● 記錄運動時間；

● 講解運動方法；

● 提出運動建議；

● ……

注意: (1) 詞數80100；

(2) 請不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮；

(3) 文中不得出現真實姓名、校名和地名；

(4) 郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

Dear Jim,

I'd like to share this app with you for it will surely do you good.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I'd like to share this app with you for it will surely do you good. In the first place, your time of exercise will be recorded every day. And then you will know whether you get enough exercise. It's especially helpful to those who want to learn some new sports because you can find many teaching videos of playing sports in it. What's more, you may get more suggestions on how to exercise properly from it. All of them come from teachers, doctors, or coaches. Lastly, it's easy for you to know more people with the same exercise hobby as you. In that way, you will always find someone who can exercise together with you.You may try it out yourself, and I hope it helps.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1、題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，要求向筆友介紹一款運動健身的手機app，根據所給要點對app作簡單的介紹。

2、例文采用一段式；時態(tài)主要是一般現在時；詳細的介紹了這款運動健身的手機app的各種功能；意思連貫；結構清晰；邏輯性強。

3、高分亮點：

短語：share……with……；be helpful to；What's more；try out；the same……as。

句型：And then you will know whether you get enough exercise；.It's especially helpful to those who want to learn some new sports because you can find many teaching videos of playing sports in it。