Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

初中生活即將結(jié)束，豐富多彩的學(xué)�；顒�(dòng)一定給你留下了許多美好的回憶。根據(jù)圖表提示，選擇一次你最喜歡的活動(dòng)進(jìn)行描述。

內(nèi)容包括：1．此次活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；

2．你的收獲或感受。

要求：1．詞數(shù)：80-100。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories.

Answer 1

【答案】

My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories. Of them, I’d like to share with you my favorite story about a basketball game. Our team got a good start by beating two strong teams. However, our captain hurt his finger during the third game. He is the brain of our team. When thinking of losing of the center, we were all down and couldn’t concentrate on the next match. Our captain found this and encouraged us to fight on and cheered us up. With the help of our captain, we played as well as the first two games. Seeing our captains waving his injured finger, we made our biggest efforts in the following games. With the cheers of our students ,we won the champion. During the celebrations, we threw our captain into the air. I would never forget it because I understood the importance of teamwork for the first time.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇提綱類話題作文。請(qǐng)你選擇一次你最喜歡的活動(dòng)進(jìn)行描述。話題貼近學(xué)生生活，使學(xué)生易于發(fā)揮。作文可以分為兩個(gè)方面：1．此次活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；2．你的收獲或感受。要做到層次分明，段落清楚。主要使用一般過(guò)在時(shí)態(tài)。注意：句子結(jié)構(gòu)要準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)要齊全，內(nèi)容要合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)要連貫，還應(yīng)滿足詞數(shù)要求。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：該文內(nèi)容合理，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，段落清晰，要點(diǎn)齊全。是一篇很好的習(xí)作。