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書面表達(dá)

網(wǎng)絡(luò)正逐漸走進(jìn)我們的生活，而其利弊也都不同程度地顯現(xiàn)了出來。請以Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet為題，寫一篇80字左右的短文。

提示：可以從read news, e-mail, chat, study, play games, see the pictures or films even the unhealthy ones等方面加以評(píng)論。

要求：1．要有表明自己觀點(diǎn)的句子。

2．書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，條理清楚，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用正確。

3．短文中應(yīng)包括提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名。

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One possible version： Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet 　　Internet is now coming into our life．It brings us not only a lot of convenience, happiness but also troubles．Some students use Internet as a tool to study．They look up the meanings of the words, a translated form of a sentence, the background of an event or a story, the information of a company or a famous person, etc．They also read news or send e-mails through it．Internet helps them learn more and study well． 　　On the other hand, some students play games, chat with friends, see the pictures or films even the unhealthy ones on the Internet the whole day．They are not interested in their subjects．It's very dangerous for them! 　　The Internet's advantages and disadvantages are shown clearly to us．I think we should make good use of it and stay away from the unhealthy websites． 　　一、評(píng)分原則 　　1．本題總分為10分，按四個(gè)檔次給分，至少包含以下要點(diǎn)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)給人們帶來的好處；存在的弊端；個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)以及所給提示性內(nèi)容。 　　2．評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。 　　3．文中若出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名，酌情扣分。 　　二、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 　　三、說明： 　　1．所給提示性詞語不受范圍和順序的限制。 　　2．相同的錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)計(jì)算。