Question

十年以后，你的生活會是什么樣呢？請你以“My life in ten years”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Everyone has his dream. My ideal job is to be a doctor when I grow up. Ten years later，I think I will be a doctor. I will love my patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.

 In order to make my dream come true, I will study hard and get more knowledge. What’s more, I’m going to do more exercises to keep me stronger. To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream must come true that day.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，要求寫一篇介紹自己未來生活的短文。本題給出的材料較為簡略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，主要用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的賓語從句和短語，為文章增色不少. 如: grow up長大；as much as possible盡可能的；in order to為了；come true實(shí)現(xiàn)等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。