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【題目】連云港開展了＂真閱讀＂工程，為了讓閱讀進校園，為了營造一種＂多讀書，讀好書＂的良好氛圍，你班將舉行一次主題班會，要求以 ＂A good book that influenced me a lot ＂ 為題作演講，向同學們介紹一本自己讀過的好書(the book’s name, the time you read, the content, the reason...)，并談談自己的感悟。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右（演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。

2. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名。

A good book that influenced me a lot

Boys and girls,

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That’s all. Thank you!

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【答案】【參考范文】

A good book that influenced me a lot

Boys and girls,

As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.

From the book, I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books!

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】這是一篇演講稿，寫作時注意格式、稱呼語及結(jié)束語；寫作時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。適當使用連詞，同時要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章添彩。根據(jù)要求必須介紹書籍的名字，閱讀時間，書籍目錄，閱讀理由等，可以根據(jù)需要適當增加細節(jié)。最后不要忘記談談自己的看法，這樣才能體現(xiàn)文章的完整性。此外，還要考慮：如何引出自己的演講話題，怎么介紹自己的這本好書；從書中學到了什么；如何深化演講主題，增強演講的鼓動性。

【亮點說明】

文章首句引用名人名言As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man.引出話題A good book that influenced me a lot。這可謂事半功倍，為文章開了個好頭。向聽眾介紹自己讀過的一本好書時，用一個簡單句My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart.直接明了，使聽眾一下就能接受到這些信息。復合句It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.介紹了書籍內(nèi)容，為后文自己的感受埋下伏筆。文章的結(jié)尾副詞具有鼓動性，盡顯文章風采。