Question

【題目】樹立自我保護意識，健康快樂地成長是每個青少年的必修課。下面是某地關(guān)心下一代工作委員會為青少年編寫的《青少年自我保護健康成長所手冊》的部分內(nèi)容。作為一名中學(xué)生，寫一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：①陳樹你是怎樣踐行手冊中提及的三條事項的；②補充至少一條你認為重要的其他事項。

要求：1.語言通順，要點齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3.80~100詞，文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.

First, I always obey the traffic rules

In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.

Answer 1

【答案】Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.

First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I won’t go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because it’s safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. It’s important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other.

What’s more, I’d like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, it’s dangerous for us to swim alone, especially in deep lakes or river. So don’t do that.

In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.

【解析】1. 認真讀表格，弄明白表格的內(nèi)容。交通規(guī)則：禁止闖紅燈、要走斑馬線。關(guān)于食物：多吃蔬菜和水果、禁止吃垃圾食品。關(guān)于交朋友：禁止單獨見陌生人、互相幫助。

2. 用簡單明了的英語把這些提示內(nèi)容寫完整。

3. 要補充你認為重要的其他一項。

4. 人稱用第一人來寫。時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。

亮點說明：

1. 本文書寫的內(nèi)容完整、條理清楚。

2. 在文中使用了First，Second，Third等詞匯，使文章層次分明。易于理解。

3. 作者所加的一條很好，防溺水，是當今安全隱患最大的。同時還運用了句型It’s dangerous for us to do sth. 使文章增色不少。因此本文為上等之作。