Question

【題目】在英語論壇上，大家都在討論電腦對我們生活的影響，請根據(jù)以下的提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，表達(dá)一下你的想法。
提示：1）電腦是最重要的發(fā)明之一，其應(yīng)用也越來越廣泛。
2）電腦有利也有弊。express your feelings.
3）人們應(yīng)該正確使用電腦。

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

The computer is one of the most important inventions. It has greatly changed people's lives. We use the computer in schools, families, shops, and offices. With the help of the computer, our lives become more easily. But the computer also has disadvantages and it has caused some social problems. Many children like playing computer games so much that they can't get away from them. Thieves can steal money on the Web easily. I think we should use the computer wisely and make it serve us better.

【解析】考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。