Question

書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容和所給詞語(yǔ)完成一篇短文．

要求：1．詞數(shù)在80個(gè)左右．

2．把圖中所示內(nèi)容表達(dá)完整，用上所給詞語(yǔ)，條理清晰，意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確．

3．短文第一句已給出．

所給詞語(yǔ)：bed, until, twelve, get up, this morning, hurry, without breakfast, get, late for class, when, ask, question, not answer, back home, can't, homework, feel sorry, decide, watch, too much

Tom watched TV too late last night. ________________________________

Answer 1

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下面談?wù)勥@篇看圖寫文的寫作步驟： 　　一、了解提示：，明確要求，瀏覽各圖 　　做這篇書面表達(dá)題，首先要按照提示：和要求，迅速瀏覽各圖，捕捉畫面信息，確定表達(dá)方向．本篇書面表達(dá)是關(guān)于一位名叫Tom的學(xué)生夜間看電視時(shí)間過(guò)長(zhǎng)，睡覺(jué)晚起床遲，連早飯都來(lái)不及吃就匆忙上學(xué)，上課遲到，課堂上回答不出老師提出的問(wèn)題，回家不會(huì)做作業(yè)，得到教訓(xùn)下決心今后不再多看電視的故事． 　　二、理出重點(diǎn)，列出重點(diǎn) 　　根據(jù)畫面內(nèi)容，列出要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)，這樣可避免遺漏主要內(nèi)容或表達(dá)文不對(duì)題． 　　1．看電視到太晚，夜間12點(diǎn)才就寢 　　2．起床晚，不吃飯就匆忙去上學(xué) 　　3．到校遲，上課遲到 　　4．老師提問(wèn)題，答不出來(lái) 　　5．回家不會(huì)做作業(yè) 　　6．很難過(guò)，決心不再多看電視 　　三、將要點(diǎn)譯成英語(yǔ)，為展開(kāi)全文的寫作勾畫出構(gòu)架 　　1．watch TV too late: not to go to bed until twelve 　　2．get up late: hurry to school without breakfast 　　3．get to school late: be late for class 　　4．a(chǎn)sk Tom a question: not answer 　　5．go back home: can't do homework 　　6．feel sorry: decide not to watch TV too much 　　四、擴(kuò)展要點(diǎn)成句，把主要內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚 　　這一步要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)和句型結(jié)構(gòu)． 　　1．Tom watched TV too late. He didn't go to bed until twelve o'clock. 　　2．He got up very late. He hurried to school without breakfast. 　　3．He got to school late. He was late for class. 　　4．The teacher asked Tom a question. He couldn't answer it. 　　5．He went back home. He couldn't do his homework. 　　6．He felt sorry. He decided not to watch TV too much. 　　五、豐富要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，增加描述細(xì)節(jié) 　　這一步要依照畫面內(nèi)容合理想像，圍繞要點(diǎn)增添必要細(xì)節(jié)．適當(dāng)使用較高級(jí) 　　詞匯和較復(fù)雜的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，以表現(xiàn)出較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力． 　　1．Tom watched TV too late last night. He didn't go to bed until twelve o'clock. 　　2．He got up very late this morning. He hurried to school without breakfast. 　　3．He got to school at eight fifteen. He was late for class. 　　4．In class the teacher asked Tom a question. He couldn't answer it. 　　5．Tom got back home from school. He couldn't do his homework. 　　6．Tom felt sorry for it. He decided not to watch TV too much. 　　六、注意體裁格式，組句謀篇成文 　　書面表達(dá)要求體裁格式和題目的要求保持一致．組句謀篇時(shí)要盡量準(zhǔn)確運(yùn) 　　用詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型結(jié)構(gòu)，增加必要的細(xì)節(jié)，根據(jù)句子的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系或描述情況的先 　　后順序，合理調(diào)整句型，重新排列句子．語(yǔ)句間使用必要的過(guò)渡詞，以表達(dá)時(shí)間、 　　事情發(fā)生的先后順序及并列、遞進(jìn)、因果、轉(zhuǎn)折等關(guān)系．全文要做到內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊 　　全，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊表達(dá)連貫，完成了試題所規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)． 　　One possible version(例文)： 　　Tom watched TV too late last night. He didn't go to bed until twelve o'clock. He got up very late this morning and hurried to school without breakfast. He got to school at eight fifteen and was late for class. In class the teacher asked Tom a question, but he couldn't answer it. When he got back home from school, Tom couldn't do his homework. He felt sorry for it and decided not to watch TV too much any longer.