Question

最近你校進(jìn)行了一次“說(shuō)出你的煩惱” Speak out your worries 的調(diào)查活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。

要求：1、內(nèi)容包括：調(diào)查結(jié)果（如圖所示）、對(duì)老師和父母的建議。

2、詞數(shù)80左右。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、姓名。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Speak out your worries

Our school has made a survey — "Don't keep your worries"．Here are the results．

About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much homework to do every day．And they feel stressed too much．About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them （in their studies）．It's difficult for them to get along/on well with their parents．The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．

Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom and dad, we want to take more exercise to keep fit/healthy,/stay healthy．We will try/do our best and we also want to play on our own．

【解析】

試題分析；這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的煩惱。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，文后注意提出自己的建議。本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱多為第一三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意運(yùn)用所給短語(yǔ)，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，適當(dāng)使用連詞。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作文考查的是學(xué)生基礎(chǔ)的寫作能力，主要是一些基礎(chǔ)句型的應(yīng)用。平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)注意對(duì)于一些常見句型句式的記憶，聯(lián)系默寫此類句型。對(duì)于一些比較經(jīng)典的段落，有目的的進(jìn)行背誦，考試作為參照。這尤其對(duì)于敘述的邏輯問(wèn)題有很大的幫助。