Question

【題目】下面四幅圖畫描述了你某天放學(xué)后發(fā)生的一件事。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這些圖畫提示，展開合理想象，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇日記，時(shí)間是2012年5月11日，星期五，天氣預(yù)報(bào)：有雨。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)90左右。日記的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．要點(diǎn)完整、層次清晰、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫。

3．文中不得使用真實(shí)的人名、校名。

May 11, 2012 Friday rainy

This afternoon, when I walked out of school, the weather changed.

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Answer 1

【答案】

May 11, 2012 Friday rainy

This afternoon, when I walked out of school, the weather changed. There were thick dark clouds in the sky. I began to feel worried because I didn’t bring an umbrella or raincoat with me when I left home in the morning. It soon started to rain. When I was hurrying home, I heard someone calling me from behind. I turned round and saw it was Li Ping. He had an umbrella and asked me to share it with him. He walked all the way with me until I got home. How thankful I was for his kindness!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本題材料是四幅圖畫。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)認(rèn)真看圖，了解圖畫內(nèi)容，展開合理想象。然后根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文人稱以第三人稱較多，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文多次使用主從復(fù)合句，為文章增色不少，如：This afternoon, when I walked out of school, the weather changed. He walked all the way with me until I got home.等等。