Question

最近，你們班召開了以“我的中國夢”為主題的班會活動。請寫一篇文章，敘述自己對“中國夢”的理解和感受。詞數(shù)80詞左右。文章開頭已給出的，不計入總詞數(shù)。

內(nèi)容要點如下：

1.作為一名學生，心中應懷揣著中國夢的理想。

2.為祖國的日益強大而感到自豪（be proud of）。

3.談?wù)勛约旱膲粝氩�寫出實現(xiàn)夢想的一些具體做法。如認真學習，強身健體，遵守規(guī)則制度，積極參加(take part in)各類有益的活動等。

4.相信夢想一定會實現(xiàn)。

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream.           

                                                                               

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                        

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As middle school students, we should have a Chinese Dream. Our country is becoming stronger and stronger, we are all proud of it. And we all believe this dream will come true in the future. I want to be a doctor when I grow up because doctors not only can save people’s lives but also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I must try to study/work hard from now on. I should often do sports to keep healthy. I should obey the school rules and take part in all kinds of meaningful activities.I hope my dream will come true, too.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點：提綱類作文

點評:該題型主要考查學生的語言表達能力，在寫作中根據(jù)所給提示和語言信息，不遺漏要點，可以適當發(fā)揮。做到表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫