Question

書面表達(dá)（共1題；滿分15分）

    假如你是王勤，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示介紹一下你的表哥和他的書房。

    1．你有個(gè)表哥，叫Peter。來(lái)自上海，現(xiàn)就讀于蘇州陽(yáng)光中學(xué)，喜歡看書；

    2．他有個(gè)書房，里面有一書架，上面有許多書；

    3．書架旁可以看到一幅畫，畫中有幾個(gè)男孩，他們?cè)诤永镉斡荆?/p>

    4．他經(jīng)常在書房里看書、做作業(yè)。很喜歡他的書房。

  要求：

    1．內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

    2. 80詞左右，  語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。

My cousin and his study

My name is Wang Qin._________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

　    

                              Peter and his study

  I have a cousin and he is Peter. He is from Shanghai and studies in Suzhou Yangguang Middle School. He likes reading books so he is good at all his subjects.

  He has a study room. There is a bookshelf in his study and there are many books on the shelf. You can see a picture beside the shelf and there are some boys in the picture. The boys are swimming in the river. He often reads books, and does his homework in his study. He likes his study very much.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章主要是Peter的書房。作者使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和there be結(jié)構(gòu)，以及現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)等，還是用了and，so等連接詞為文章增色不少。對(duì)于初一的學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，確屬不錯(cuò)的英語(yǔ)短文了。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。