Question

【題目】在“八禮四儀”教育活動中，同學(xué)們收獲很大，尤其是李偉同學(xué)。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文，敘述李偉在活動前后的表現(xiàn)。

1詞數(shù)在100詞左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名。

I am glad that Li Wei has made great progress．_______________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】I am glad that Li Wei has made great progress．In the past, he was often late for school．He used to quarrel with his classmates．He made a lot of noise in class．He seldom cared about the environment．He threw rubbish everywhere．He was so lazy that he didn’t do his homework．Sometimes he played computer games too much．His parents and teachers were all worried about him．Now, he has changed a lot．He comes to school on time．He is friendly to his classmates．He listens to the teachers carefully in class．He often helps collect the rubbish with other students．He is hard-working and often does extra work for us．He can finish his homework on time．All the teachers and classmates like him very much.I hope our class will organize more activities．Our classmates will take part in them actively．We will certainly be friendlier, more helpful and more skillful.

【解析】這是一篇給提綱作文。要求圍繞在“八禮四儀”教育活動前后，李偉同學(xué)表現(xiàn)為內(nèi)容寫一篇文章。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，本文重點對李偉在活動前后的表現(xiàn)加以對比，體現(xiàn)其在此次活動中的收獲。并提出至少兩條于此活動相關(guān)的建議。短文要做到語言點全面，語句通順、意思連貫，中心突出。短文中需注意一般過去時與用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)的運用。