Question

【題目】書面表達。(15分)

過 去	現(xiàn) 在
舊房	高樓（tall buildings）
河水污濁(dirty)	河水清澈(clean)
步行、騎自行車	乘公交車、小汽車

請按照下面6幅圖和表格的提示，寫一篇題為 “Changes in Our Hometown”的英語短文。字數(shù)80左右。（開頭已給出不計入字數(shù)）

Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.

In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many ring roads and the living conditions are comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給圖畫作文，根據(jù)圖畫，介紹我們家鄉(xiāng)的變化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去式，人稱為第一和第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：there used to be…；The roads were…；The river is…；I am glad to…；But I think…等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達珍惜現(xiàn)在的美好生活的感情。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了變化，接下來從房屋、河流和道路這三方面介紹我們家鄉(xiāng)過去和現(xiàn)在的不同，最后指出要珍惜現(xiàn)在的生活。此處用了take place, went to work, by bus, be glad to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。