【題目】今年511日,你校組織了一次社會實踐活動,部分學(xué)生選擇去了紅星農(nóng)場(見導(dǎo)圖一),其余學(xué)生選擇去了科技博物館(見導(dǎo)圖二)。請根據(jù)你所選擇的實踐活動寫一篇英語日記,記錄當(dāng)天的經(jīng)歷和感受。

導(dǎo)圖一 導(dǎo)圖二

注意:(1)日記必須包括你所選擇導(dǎo)圖的所有要點,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名;

(3)詞數(shù):80 -100。日記格式及首句己給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。

Friday, May 11th

Today I had a school trip.

【答案】Possible version 1:

Friday. May 11th

Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.

The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!

I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!

(98 words)

Possible version 2:

Friday, May 11th

Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7 :00.

As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.

I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!

(99 words)

【解析】寫作

首先要確定文章的體裁,這是一篇日記,這就決定了文章的人稱。其次要看到要求是“根據(jù)你所選擇的實踐活動”進(jìn)行寫作,所以要在兩個導(dǎo)圖中挑選一個進(jìn)行描述,不需要都寫。在完全明白題目含義后就要根據(jù)導(dǎo)圖中的要點(包括人物、交通方式、感受、活動)進(jìn)行作文,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z句進(jìn)行連接、保證作文連貫得體即可。

寫作亮點:

本文首先用首段點明了前往的地點,參與的實踐活動的名稱,補充介紹了天氣。第二段介紹了在農(nóng)場的活動,有相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)的補充,如“took a walk around the farm”。對于“喂雞”這一活動也進(jìn)行了較為細(xì)致的描寫“When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends.”文章還重視簡單句、并列句、復(fù)雜句的交替使用,還在第二段末尾運用了感嘆句,使得文章句式變化多樣。在最后一段通?梢员磉_(dá)自己的綜合感受和對下次活動的期待,這樣的文章就能夠結(jié)構(gòu)完整,細(xì)節(jié)豐富,連貫得體了。

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