Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

沒有無私的、自我犧牲的母愛的幫助, 孩子的心靈將是一片荒漠。我們要學(xué)會感恩, 學(xué)會回報(bào)。某英語網(wǎng)站舉辦以“My mother”為題的英語征文活動, 請你根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖提供的信息, 寫一篇短文, 介紹自己的母親和你的親情故事。

要求：(l)語句通順, 表達(dá)正確；

(2)短文須包括全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

(3)不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

(4)字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60詞。

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

We need love. We also need to love others. The person I love most is my mohter. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long balck hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons on the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after graduating from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes for her to make her look still young. I’ll take her to travel all over the world.

Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文，主要介紹母親的相關(guān)信息（年齡、工作、外貌、喜歡的東西和不喜歡的東西）、你的母親為你做的事情以及你將為你的母親做些什么事情。注意時態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確使用，且靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞、短語以及句型使文章更加生動形象。