Question

【題目】某市今年舉辦主題為“把希望帶給貧困孩子”的活動，請你以學(xué)生會的名義用英文寫一篇倡議書，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1、 許多貧困家庭無力負(fù)擔(dān)孩子去上學(xué)；(afford)

2、 孩子們沒有足夠的錢去買學(xué)習(xí)用品和衣物；(school things and clothes)

3、 每個孩子都應(yīng)該有上學(xué)的權(quán)力；(have the right to do something)

4、 我們應(yīng)該盡最大的努力去幫助他們，比如……; (try one's best to do something)

5、 讓我們一起給貧困孩子創(chuàng)造一個更美好的未來。(work together)

注意：

1、 文章開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2、 詞數(shù)80左右。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear students,

In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. Because their family can’t afford to send them to school. At the same time, children don’t have enough money to buy school things or clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for them. So we should try our best to do something to help them, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We believe if we work together, we can make a better future for them.

Thanks for your joining!

Students’ Union

【解析】

1. 本文是一篇話題作文，題目給出了文章需要包含的主要內(nèi)容，不要缺項(xiàng)落項(xiàng)，也不要逐字翻譯。合理運(yùn)用給出詞匯，注意主謂一致、時態(tài)和語態(tài)等。本文要求學(xué)生會的名義寫一篇倡議書， 因此作文的格式要用倡議書的格式。

2. 本例文以第一人稱書寫，時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時，整個格式是倡議書的格式。全文的連詞運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，文章通順、語義準(zhǔn)確。既包含要點(diǎn)，由不啰嗦。

3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：In some parts of；out of school；afford to；At the same time；enough money to；In my opinion；the right to do；few；try our best to do；and so on；Thanks for。