【題目】書面表達(dá)

為了使同學(xué)們與人交往時(shí)舉止更加文雅，你校學(xué)生會(huì)正在舉辦以“How to behave well？”為題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文。

要點(diǎn)如下：

1.學(xué)生應(yīng)該守時(shí)、守信、不撒謊、不說臟話；

2.禮貌待人，熱心助人；

3.遵守交通規(guī)則，不在公共場(chǎng)所喧嘩，不亂扔垃圾；

4.請(qǐng)你就此話題再補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人看法。

要求：1.不要逐字翻譯。在文中不要提及真實(shí)的校名和姓名。

2.詞數(shù)60~80。

【答案】How to behave well?

Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.

As a student, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. We’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.

Finally, learn to work with others. We need good teamwork in our life.

【解析】

這篇作文的題材是一篇征文，寫作背景是學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)正在舉辦的一個(gè)以“如何表現(xiàn)的更好”為題的征文比賽，目的是為了使同學(xué)們與人交往時(shí)舉止更加文雅，具體的要求已經(jīng)在題目中列出。需要注意的是要求中寫出不要逐字翻譯。這說明要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重新解讀，使用正確的句式例如祈使句以及恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接方式使得文章行文連貫，最后。第四條是需要就此話題補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人看法，這一點(diǎn)不應(yīng)當(dāng)遺漏。

首先開頭可以用一句總起句來說明“表現(xiàn)好是很重要的”，寫到了Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.（表現(xiàn)良好是與其他人交往融洽的秘訣。），這里用到了the secret of…（…的秘訣），第二段開始就進(jìn)行了較為細(xì)致的描寫，用到了一些較為實(shí)用且變化多樣的句型，例如As a student, I think it’s very important to do（作為一名學(xué)生，我認(rèn)為做…是非常重要的。），keep promises保持承諾，lie to others向別人撒謊，say dirty words說臟話，be polite to others對(duì)其他人禮貌，ready to help people in need樂于去幫助有需要的人，We’d better not do…我們最好不要做…，talk loudly in public在公共場(chǎng)合大聲交談，throw litter扔垃圾，obey traffic rules遵守交通規(guī)則。文章最后一段。總結(jié)了全文提出了自己的建議。說到了要“學(xué)會(huì)和他人合作”（learn to work with others）以及“生活中需要良好的團(tuán)隊(duì)合作”（need good teamwork in our life），總體來說，文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，句式變化多樣，完成了題目的寫作要求。

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