Question

【題目】林娜和父母正在澳大利亞悉尼旅游。今天是他們到達(dá)悉尼的第二天．他們游覽了悉尼著名的城市動物園——塔龍加動物園(Taronga Zoo)。假如你是林娜，請根據(jù)下面表格中給出的提示寫一篇日記，簡要介紹塔龍加動物園并描述自己在園中的活動。

塔龍加動物園
歷史及規(guī)模
地理位置
活動

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1916年開放；擁有4000余只動物

位于悉尼市，臨近悉尼歌劇院(Sydney Opera House)

參觀了來自世界各地的動物，如大象、長頸鹿、老虎等

參觀了澳大利亞本土動物卡拉(koala)、袋鼠及鴯鹋(emu)等

欣賞了動物園著名的鳥類及海獅(sea lion)表演　　要求：1.日記必須包含表格中所給出的全部內(nèi)容；

2．詞數(shù)：不少于80詞(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。

August 20th，Thursday Sunny

Answer 1

【答案】August 20th，Thursday Sunny

Sydney is really a beautiful city.This is my second day here.I visited Taronga Zoo together with my parents today.Taronga Zoo, which is very close to the Sydney Opera House, is a city zoo.It opened in 1916 and is the home to over 4，000 animals.It is such a nice place to visit that we spent the whole day there.In the zoo we saw a lot of animals from all over the world such as elephants, giraffes and tigers.We also saw many local animals such as strong kangaroos, cute koalas and large emus.Besides, we watched the famous bird show and sea lion show in the zoo.

In a word, it was a nice day for me.I'm looking forward to tomorrow's trip to other places in Sydney.

【解析】短文是一篇日記的形式，介紹塔龍加動物園的情況，句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，敘述自己的在園中的活動情況，應(yīng)該用一般過去時。不要遺漏要點，所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法，注意上下文的銜接。短文用了一些短語和句式，如：.It is such a nice place to visit that we spent the whole day there. In a word, it was a nice day for me.用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，用了連詞such…that…增加了文章的亮點。