Question

根據(jù)表格中的信息，寫(xiě)一篇作文，比較你的兩個(gè)好朋友Bob和Mary。
要求：1. 50—70詞；2. 文中不要出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)信息。

	Bob	Mary
Differences	taller	tall
	outgoing	more outgoing
	play soccer	go skating
The same	short curly hair
	friendly and kind
	enjoy singing

                                                                                                                              
                                                                  
                                                                   
                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                     

Answer 1

I have two good friends.They are Bob and Mary.In some ways,they are the same;in some ways they are different.They both have short curly hair.They are both friendly and kind.
And they both enjoy singing.However,there are some differences between them.Bob is taller than Mary.Mary is more outgoing than Bob.Bob likes playing soccer after school.But Mary likes going skating in her free time..

試題分析：這是一篇圖表作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一、三人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：in some ways在某些方面，enjoy singing.喜歡唱歌，more outgoing than Bob比鮑勃更外向，likes going skating喜歡滑冰，in her free time在她空閑時(shí)間里等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.