Question

你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部正舉行 “ 文明城市 ” 為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示及要求寫一篇應(yīng)征稿。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1. 尊敬師長(zhǎng)，禮貌誠(chéng)信

2. 待人友善，助人為樂(lè)

3. 遵守交規(guī), 不闖紅燈

4. 保護(hù)環(huán)境 （舉一至兩個(gè)例子）

5. 自擬一至兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容

要求：必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

詞數(shù)90左右，不包含已給詞句。

文中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。

參考詞匯：respect尊敬，obey遵守

Civilized City

We are glad that our city is among the civilized cities in our country. As students, what

shall we do to keep up the good work?

First of all, we ___________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We are glad that our city is among the civilized cities in our country. As students, what

shall we do to keep up the good work?

First of all, we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. Also, we ought to be polite and honest. Second, it’s always good to treat others with kindness and be ready to help people in need. Third, we must obey the traffic rules and mustn’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Last but not least, it’s important and necessary to help protect the environment. For example, we shouldn’t leave litter everywhere. We’d better not pick flowers or step on the grass.

In a word, if every one of us takes action now, our city will be better and better.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng):該題型主要考查學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力，在寫作中根據(jù)所給提示和語(yǔ)言信息，不遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。做到表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫