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【題目】書面表達(dá)

去年，紹興市區(qū)有200個(gè)公共自行車站點(diǎn)、5000輛自行車投入使用。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，倡導(dǎo)紹興市民綠色出行。

現(xiàn)狀	1.交通擁擠； 2.停車?yán)щy； 3.……
騎車優(yōu)點(diǎn)	1.方便（在醫(yī)院、學(xué)校、公園旁可租車rent）； 2.便宜（1小時(shí)內(nèi)免費(fèi)）； 3.……
你的希望	……

要求：1. 短文必須包括表中全部內(nèi)容，并補(bǔ)充“現(xiàn)狀”和“騎車優(yōu)點(diǎn)”各1條；

2. “你的希望”至少在兩句以上；

3. 文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚；

4. 詞數(shù)：80-100.。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Last year, 200 public bicycle stops and 5000 bicycles were put into use in Shaoxing. Nowadays,__________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Last year, 200 public bicycle stops and 5000 bicycles were put into use in Shaoxing. Nowadays, you can often see streets crowded with cars. What’s more, it’s difficult to find some places to park cars. However, riding bicycles can help solve the problem. First, it’s really convenient to rent a bike. You can rent one near hospitals, schools and parks. Besides, it’s free if you rent for less than one hour. And the most important thing is that riding bikes produces no pollution and it can help protect our environment.

I hope more and more people can choose to go out by bicycle. It’s not only good for the environment, but also for our own health.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文按照寫作要求，根據(jù)漢語提示，用簡潔的語言，準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出漢語意思，語言流暢。本文寫作思路清晰，特別是一些連詞的運(yùn)用，比如：Nowadays, What’s more, However, First, Besides等，使語意更加連貫，層次分明。并依據(jù)要求，提出了自己的希望：I hope more and more people can choose to go out by bicycle. It’s not only good for the environment, but also for our own health. 倡導(dǎo)市民綠色出行。