Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)下面的圖片描述的是發(fā)生在你媽媽身上的事。請你用一段連貫的文字，描述下面三幅圖中所展示的內(nèi)容，并根據(jù)生活常識，發(fā)揮想象，續(xù)寫第四幅圖可能發(fā)生的事情。（不少于80詞）

One evening, when my mother __ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

One evening, when my mother was cooking in the kitchen, the telephone rang. My mother hurried to the living room to answer the phone. She thought she would be back in a minute. But it was an important phone. They talked and talked and my mother completely forgot the cooking. When my mother returned to the kitchen, what did she see? The food in the pan was burning! What could she do? She took the cover of the pan and covered the pan with it. In a second, the fire was put out, but the food was burnt.

What a pity!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文。我們要做的用一段連貫的文字，描述下面三幅圖中所展示的內(nèi)容，并根據(jù)生活常識，發(fā)揮想象，續(xù)寫第四幅圖可能發(fā)生的事情。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是過去時(shí)態(tài)和第三人稱，注意根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。。用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，注意表達(dá)順序，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求，語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，時(shí)態(tài)正確，書寫規(guī)范。文中使用了一些固定句式及短語My mother hurried to the living room to answer the phone. In a second, covered… with等，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理性。