Question

【題目】Writing（作文）

Write at least 60 words on the topic"The beauty in my life"（以"我生活中的美"為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）

生活中的美無處不在，如在學(xué)�；顒�(dòng)中、與家人共處時(shí)、與朋友歡聚時(shí)、與動(dòng)物相處時(shí)……，請(qǐng)選擇一個(gè)方面，結(jié)合發(fā)生在你自己身上的一次經(jīng)歷，來寫一寫你發(fā)現(xiàn)的家人或師生間的親情之美，朋友或同學(xué)間的友誼之美，人與動(dòng)物間的和諧之美……，并說說理由．

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、學(xué)校及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．）

Answer 1

【答案】The world is full of love everywhere.My class life is full of happiness．（要點(diǎn)一，班級(jí)生活如何）

During the three years' school life,I've got so many things from my class life.Friendship is

the most important and precious thing that I get．（高分句型一）（要點(diǎn)二，最大的收獲）

I never feel lonely because I have my lovely friends.Once I failed,my friends supported me

and gave me courage to move on.When I was ill,my friends helped me and looked after me

well.When I succeeded,my friends congratulated me and shared my happiness.（要點(diǎn)三，經(jīng)歷）Friendship is one of the greatest things that I got from my class life.As the old saying

goes,"A friend in need is a friend indeed."I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class

life.（高分句型二）In the last three months,I want to try my best to help my friends and make

some wonderful memories.（要點(diǎn)四，做些什么）I expect to maintain the friendship between

my classmates and me.I believe our friendship will last forever.（高分句型三）

【解析】

題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文，圍繞“我生活中的美”完成本篇文章，本篇文章可以使用一般過去時(shí)，講述自己生活中的美。寫作時(shí)，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化。