Question

【題目】

Jim 過去	1. 功課好，積極參加學(xué)校的各項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。 2. …
Jim 現(xiàn)在	1. 對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)沒興趣，上課不專心。 2. …
你的看法	玩電腦游戲可能使你放松，但……
你的建議	(至少發(fā)揮兩點(diǎn))

81. 假如你是李華，你的筆友Jim最近沉溺于玩電腦游戲，為此你很擔(dān)心。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示給Jim 寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶�及建議。

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；

2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。

Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you. You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school.But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don’t listen to the teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, you can’t hand in your homework on time.Perhaps playing computer games can make you fell relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study. And it may do harm to your health. For example, it can hurt your eyes and neck.I hope you should achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored? As your friend, I’ll be glad to share your happiness and sadness.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Jim 寫一封信，談?wù)勎业目捶�及建議。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I really feel…….，You used to……，you can’t…….，Perhaps playing computer games can…….，it can hurt……，I hope…….，Why not……？等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。