Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Jim 正在進(jìn)行一項(xiàng)家庭電腦使用情況調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格提示內(nèi)容，給Jim 寫一封電子郵件介紹自己和家人使用電腦的情況。不少于60 詞，電子郵件的格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

There are four people in my family and we have got two computers at home.

My parents share one, and my sister shares one with me. My father often reads the news on the Internet for half an hour. My mother often checks her email and talks to her students. It usually takes two hours. My sister often draws on the computer for half an hour. I usually do my homework on the computer for an hour.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇書信作文。你的英國(guó)筆友Jim 正在進(jìn)行一項(xiàng)家庭電腦使用情況調(diào)查，要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，給Jim寫一封電子郵件介紹自己和家人使用電腦的情況。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。