Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)。（10分）
某英文網(wǎng)站提出“走路去上學(xué)”的倡議，請(qǐng)你就這一話題寫(xiě)一篇約80詞的英語(yǔ)文章。內(nèi)容包括：走路有利健康，和朋友結(jié)伴而行有利于……，讓父母節(jié)省……，使城市……等；可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名的相關(guān)信息。
參考詞匯：be good for, with friends,save

Answer 1

I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for our health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving help to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.

解析試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，一封倡議書(shū)。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上，為了讓表達(dá)更符合邏輯，可以適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。