Question

假如你是李明，學(xué)校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)和教師因?yàn)閾?dān)心同學(xué)們?yōu)g覽不健康的站，關(guān)閉了教室內(nèi)電腦的絡(luò)瀏覽功能，你們感到很難過(guò)。請(qǐng)你給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，勸說(shuō)校長(zhǎng)同意開(kāi)通教室內(nèi)的絡(luò)。信中要包括下表中的所有內(nèi)容:

事 由	教室內(nèi)的電腦不能上，建議學(xué)校開(kāi)通絡(luò)。
勸說(shuō)理由	1.有利于查找資料； 2. …… 3. ……

 

要求： 

1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；

2）要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等；

3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不記入總詞數(shù)）；

4）建議措施不少于兩點(diǎn)。

Dear Headmaster,

I’m writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom.                 

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

   I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and let us get access to the Internet at school.                                                                         

     Looking forward to your reply.                                                 

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Headmaster,

I’m writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom. We know you’re afraid that we may be exposed to unhealthy websites or spend too much time playing games online. Personally, I think surfing the Internet can bring us much more advantages.

First of all, we can surf the Internet for a wide range of learning resources in a short time without working hard in the library. Furthermore, during the lunchtime, we can communicate with our foreign friends, sharing our experiences, cultures and studies through the Internet. This way, we can improve our language skills by chatting online. Last but not least, as high school students, we are old and wise enough to tell right from wrong. Believe in us and we will learn how to stay away from unhealthy websites. 

I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and let us get access to the Internet at school.

Looking forward to your reply. 

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封信勸說(shuō)校長(zhǎng)同意開(kāi)通教室內(nèi)的網(wǎng)絡(luò)。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱(chēng)就是第一二人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。