Question

【題目】 時光飛逝，轉(zhuǎn)眼間初中生活即將結(jié)束。在你的學(xué)習(xí)或生活中，你一定取得了不少進(jìn)步，比如良好性格的形成、學(xué)習(xí)方法的掌握、生活技能的獲得等。請根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容，結(jié)合所給要點提示，以“The Biggest Progress I Have Made”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文。

要點：1.你取得了哪方面的進(jìn)步； 2.你是如何取得這一進(jìn)步的； 3.你的感想。

要求：1.短文須包括所有要點提示，語句通順，意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2.題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)； 3.文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實姓名和校名。

參考詞匯：overcome；be afraid of；the school art festival；congratulate

The Biggest Progress I Have Made

Everyone has made a lot of progress in junior high school life.

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

The Biggest Progress I Have Made

Everyone has made a lot of progress in junior high school life. The biggest progress I have ever made is that I have overcome shyness.

I used to be so shy that I was afraid of speaking in public. Last year, my teacher asked me to sing a song at the school art festival because of my sweet voice. I was afraid and wanted to give up. But my teacher encouraged me and helped me practice again and again. The moment came, I remembered my teacher’s words: Believe in yourself! Everything went well. When my classmates congratulated me, my eyes were filled with tears.

At that moment, I was so proud of myself. From then on, I have changed a lot and became brave and outgoing.

【解析】

題干解讀：這是一篇話題作文。要求根據(jù)題目“The Biggest Progress I Have Made”和提示的內(nèi)容完成作文。寫作時要注意語句通順，語意連貫，緊扣要點，注意句子之間的連接與過渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示。