Question

【題目】我校選修課老師要求以小組為單位在學(xué)校里進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查，以下圖表是你們小組的調(diào)查結(jié)果。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)圖表信息，給選修課老師提供一份總結(jié)報(bào)告。第一段簡(jiǎn)單描述圖表信息，第二段合理推測(cè)學(xué)生從事這些活動(dòng)背后的原因，第三段介紹自己喜歡的課外活動(dòng)，并說(shuō)明理由。

要求：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于80詞；

2. 首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。

As society develops, students are attaching more importance to how they arrange their after-school activities. According to the statistics shown in the chart,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】As society develops, students are attaching more importance to how they arrange their after-school activities. According to the statistics shown in the chart, ninety-nine percent of the students want to visit friends and more than half of the students like talking on the phone. Only 22 percent of students join the school clubs.

Why do so many students like to communicate with others? I think it is mainly caused by too much study pressure. They have a lot of lessons at school but little chance to exchange ideas with their classmates. After school, many students will spare time to talk to someone to ease the pressure of learning.

As for me, I like listening to light music. I joined the music club in my spare time because the beautiful music allows me to really relax.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如according to，in the chart，want to visit friends，more than，half of，on the phone，join the school clubs，so many，communicate with others，too much，spare time to do，as for me等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)According to the statistics shown in the chart, ninety-nine percent of the students want to visit friends and more than half of the students like talking on the phone./ They have a lot of lessons at school but little chance to exchange ideas with their classmates.和I think it is mainly caused by too much study pressure./ I joined the music club in my spare time because the beautiful music allows me to really relax.等從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。