Question

【題目】下面是某報(bào)刊登的一封讀者來信，請(qǐng)你以編者Serina 的身份給這位同學(xué)回信，并針對(duì)她的問題給出合理的建議。80詞左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Serina,

Lisa and I are in the same class and she sits next to me. She is an excellent student and I can learn a lot from her. However, she talks so much that sometimes I can’t pay attention to my studies. I want to change seats with another girl, but I’m afraid it will hurt Lisa’s feelings. What should I do?

Yours,

Winnie

Dear Winnie,

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Yours,

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Winnie,

I’m sorry to learn that Lisa is making it difficult for you to pay attention to your studies. However, I think Lisa talks to you because she likes you. What’s more, she can help you with your studies.

In my opinion, you should get to know her better. Once you become close friends, it will be easier for you to talk to her and tell her how you feel about the problem. I’m sure she will understand you.

I hope you like my suggestion.

Yours,

Serina

【解析】

寫作思路：這是一篇書信作文，首先要開篇點(diǎn)題，陳述寫信的緣由。然后針對(duì)陳述事實(shí)提出自己的建議，最后做出總結(jié)，做到首尾呼應(yīng)。

本篇文章，首先以I’m sorry to learn that Lisa is making it difficult for you to pay attention to your studies.開頭陳述事實(shí)，并且用到that 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，很自然貼切。However, I think Lisa talks to you because she likes you.中用However表示轉(zhuǎn)折，接著陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)。What’s more,…對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)一步補(bǔ)充說明，接下來用In my opinion, you should….對(duì)接下來需要采取的措施提出自己的建議。Once you become close friends, it will be easier for you to talk to her and tell her how you feel about the problem用到it is+adj for sb to do sth，句型很棒。最后I hope you like my suggestion寫出自己的期望，總結(jié)順暢自然。