Question

【題目】據(jù)悉，我國青少年的近視率居全球第一，70%的學生有視力方面的問題．為引起廣大青少年的重視，某英語報刊正在開展以"SavingOurEyesight"為題的征文活動．請根據(jù)以下

提示寫一篇短文投稿，分析造成青少年近視的原因并提出保護視力的合理建議．

要求：1．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范．

2．所有提示須全部用上，并作適當發(fā)揮．

3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名．

4.80詞左右（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）．

Saving Our Eyesight

As the saying goes, "Eyes are the window to the soul（心靈 ） "However, 70% of us have poor eyesight. What has caused this problem?

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Inaword,let’stakecareofoureyessothatwecanseeourbrightfuture.

Answer 1

【答案】Saving Our Eyesight

As the saying goes, “Eyes are the window to the soul（心靈）.”However, 70%of us have poor eyesight. What has caused this problem?

The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes. For example, many of us read in wrong positions such as reading in bed or keeping our eyes too close to the book. Besides, spending too much time on screen and taking less exercise also cause poor eyesight.

Now something must be done to protect our eyes. First, sit straight while reading. Second, don't forget to rest during the working time. It's also helpful to relax our eyes by seeing some green trees or doing eye exercises. Last but not least，eat some food that is good for our eyes like carrots or fish.

In a word, let's take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future.

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文。要求以" Saving Our Eyesight"為題，寫一篇關(guān)于保護眼睛的文章，分析造成青少年近視的原因并提出保護視力的合理建議。寫作時所有提示須全部用上，并作適當發(fā)揮。作文的首尾都已經(jīng)給出，中間可以用兩段來進行寫作，首先分析造成青少年近視的原因：比如在床上閱讀或者眼睛離書太近。此外，觀看手機或電視太長時間，少運動也會導致視力下降。然后介紹保護視力的合理建議：姿勢端正。注意休息，放松我們的眼睛，吃些對眼睛有益的食物，如胡蘿卜或魚。注意人稱和時態(tài)的使用，時態(tài)應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。恰當使用介詞，做到行文流暢，條例清晰。