Question

【題目】（題文）請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇題為＂The Population Problem＂ 的短文。（80 詞左右）

提示：1. 人口問(wèn)題是當(dāng)今世界上最大的問(wèn)題之一；

2. 中國(guó)是世界上人口最多的國(guó)家；

3. 如果人口增長(zhǎng)過(guò)快，將會(huì)帶來(lái)許多嚴(yán)重問(wèn)題（請(qǐng)舉例說(shuō)明）；

4. 我們應(yīng)繼續(xù)執(zhí)行計(jì)劃生育政策，以控制人口增長(zhǎng)。

要求：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

The Population Problem

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Answer 1

【答案】The Population Problem

The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It’s about one fifth of the world’s population. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for every family, but also for the whole nation. It has become a serious problem. In many less developed areas, some parents prefer boys to girls. As a result, many girls can’t go to school. I think we should do something to control the population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling China’s population.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類短文，所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，可有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料可知，本篇短文要把目前人口太多這一問(wèn)題，以及我們中國(guó)人口的情況表達(dá)出來(lái)。通過(guò)分析可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞、從句等，使上下文意連貫，表達(dá)富有條理，更有邏輯性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順，注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。覆蓋了所有信息，無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用，詞數(shù)符合要求。