Question

【題目】提示寫一篇短文,向某英語報社投稿。

要求:①包含所有要點(diǎn),不逐字翻譯,圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

②書寫規(guī)范、工整,條理清晰;

③文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、地名、校名等;

④詞數(shù):80-100 詞,短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。

Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?

Nowadays,more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.

Answer 1

【答案】Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?

Nowadays,more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.

Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, it's convenient for them to call their parents,teachers or friends. Second,they can search what they need on mobile phones. For example,they can look up new words and look through news.

However,some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time.Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. Besides,it's unhealthy for the mind and the body,such as hurting eyes,making some bad friends.

In my opinion,students can't use mobile phones at school. It's bad for our health and study.

【解析】這是一篇觀點(diǎn)型作文。關(guān)于中學(xué)生能在學(xué)校里使用手機(jī)嗎？首先闡明當(dāng)前的現(xiàn)狀、現(xiàn)象。然后可以寫出不同人的觀點(diǎn)。再用不同的論據(jù)來證明不同人的論點(diǎn)、觀點(diǎn)。適當(dāng)增加銜接詞，使文章有邏輯。注意人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)的變化形式。