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【題目】書面表達(dá)

76. 減負(fù)之后，同學(xué)們有了更多的課余時(shí)間。某校英語角就“如何讓課余生活更有意義？”展開了討論，大家各抒己見。請你根據(jù)下圖提示，以“How To Make Our Spare Time More

Meaningful?”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。

注意： (1)短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫;

(2)詞數(shù)90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

(3)短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。

(4)參考詞匯：提升素養(yǎng)promote literacy

How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?

Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?

My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.

In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.

In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)如何讓課外生活更有意義。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如a good chance to do, get close to, in my opinion, what’s more, take an active part in, in a word, make full use of, spare time以及“比較級and比較級”等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。