Question

【題目】書面表達。

最近，學校就空中俱樂部的英語學習內容設置做了意向調查(結果見下面圖表)。請你幫俱樂部用英語寫一篇報告，并談談你自己的想法或建議。

◆51% practice spoken English

◆25% watch English movies

◆18% read more classics

◆6% learn foreign culture

注意：(1)文中應包含圖表所提供的要點，可適當發(fā)揮；(2)想法和建議至少兩條；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；(3)詞數：80～100(短文開頭不計入總詞數，考生可以選擇使用)。

Recently we've made a survey of school sky English club.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently we’ve made a servey of sky English club. Here are the results. We find that fifty one percent of the students practice their spoken English by using Internet. Twenty five percent like watching English movies, which can make their holiday life better. Eighteen percent would like to read more English claasics because they’re interested in them. Six percent hope that they can learn more foreign culture, such as manners and westen festivals.

As far as I know, it’s very helpful to improve engliah by singing English songs. Maybe we can invite foreigners to introduce good ways to learn songs. I’m sure all of us will have fun in the sky English club.

【解析】試題分析：本文考查圖表作文。1）弄清圖表內容。（2）結合提示詞，明確考查意圖。根據提示，選擇正確的時態(tài)，運用正確的時態(tài)，運用所給或所學的詞語，盡量運用熟悉的句型，作適當展開。（3）注意運用適當的連詞使句子流暢，連貫。（4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標點符號等的正確運用。（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，主謂一致，句子的語序和表達是否符合英文習慣等，盡量減少錯誤。注意：(1)文中應包含圖表所提供的要點，可適當發(fā)揮；(2)想法和建議至少兩條；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；(3)詞數：80～100

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。時態(tài)運用正確，內容要點完整、應用詞匯靈活準確，句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，上下文連貫，字數符合要求。