Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李平，建湖某中學(xué)九年級(jí)學(xué)生，你的加拿大筆友Susan正在學(xué)漢語(yǔ)，她給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件，詢問(wèn)你上次英語(yǔ)考試情況，并請(qǐng)你為她推薦一份漢語(yǔ)讀物。請(qǐng)你給她回復(fù)郵件。

注意：1. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫：2. 詞數(shù)：100左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾己給出 不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)）；3. 不得出現(xiàn)與實(shí)的校名和人名。

Dear Susan,

I’m glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear Susan,

I’m glad to hear from you. I’d like to show my sincere thanks to you for your great care for me.

In the email, you asked me about my last English exam which I took last time. I kept a peaceful mood all the time. As a result, I did well in the exam. This exam not only helped me find out the weakness in my study, but also built up my confidence in the coming challenges, which undoubtly, is great help to me.

As for the Chinese reading material, I strongly recommend A dream of Red Mansions, for it is one of four classical novels and thought highly of by people at home and abroad. You are sure to fall in lover with it the moment you start reading it.

I do hope you can make great progress in your Chinese study.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。雖然是一封書(shū)信但是短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，我們只需要陳述主要內(nèi)容。根據(jù)提示可知主要寫以下方面的內(nèi)容：首先對(duì)對(duì)方的關(guān)心表示感謝，然后介紹自己上次的考試情況：發(fā)揮怎么樣，從考試中發(fā)現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題，這里用一般過(guò)去時(shí)進(jìn)行介紹；之后向Susan推薦漢語(yǔ)書(shū)籍并說(shuō)明理由，改段采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，信的結(jié)尾處可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，表達(dá)自己對(duì)Susan的祝福。