Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

某英文報(bào)以An Unforgettable Day (《難忘的一天》) 為題，面向中學(xué)生開(kāi)展征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文參加此次活動(dòng)。

內(nèi)容包括：

1、哪一天讓你感到難忘；

2、什么事（開(kāi)心的、傷心的或是有特別意義的）讓你感到那天難忘；

3、那一天你經(jīng)歷了什么；

4、那天的經(jīng)歷對(duì)你有什么影響或者你有什么感受。

要求： 1、80-100 詞；

2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。

Answer 1

【答案】

An Unforgettable Day

I’ll never forget June 11th, 2012. It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What’s worse, I got a “C” in my favorite subject.

After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on, and I heard the song “Happy birthday”. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. “Oh, it’s my birthday.” I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday party.

I’ll never forget that day.

【解析】

試題分析：本文內(nèi)容要求你以“An Unforgettable Day ”為題寫一篇短文。我們首先應(yīng)該確定用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，本文應(yīng)用第一人稱。靈活采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文時(shí)態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，敘事流暢，內(nèi)容表達(dá)清晰，使用了不少固定結(jié)構(gòu)，如：on the way to..., something rude, what’s more; be surprised to do, it’s my first time to do sth.等。文中還使用after that等詞為短文增色不少,將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)的使用十分恰當(dāng)。