Question

【題目】根據(jù)下列圖片，用英語寫一篇90詞左右的短文。要求完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容。

（參考詞匯：stick n. 拐杖）

Answer 1

【答案】Sample writing

One day Tom went to a park with his friends.

They wanted to take a photo at the gate of the park. While they were taking a photo, Tom suddenly saw an old blind man with a stick standing by the street. It was clear that the man wanted to cross the street, but there was a lot of traffic on the street. When the traffic light was green, Tom ran to the blind man and helped him cross the street.

The old blind man said “thanks” to Tom. They also took a photo together. Tom’s friends were proud of him.

【解析】這是一篇看圖作文，要求我們完整地?cái)⑹鰣D片中所發(fā)生的事情。首先我們應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，了解圖片想要表達(dá)的意思，然后用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。通過觀察圖片我們可以知道，這里主要說的是一個(gè)男孩幫助一個(gè)盲人過馬路的事情。敘述這件事情的時(shí)候，我們應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，要將事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物及事件敘述清楚，這是記敘文的四個(gè)要素。同時(shí)我們還需要注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，要注意語法的規(guī)范、詞和短語的使用要準(zhǔn)確。另外，我們還應(yīng)使用一些好的句型和短語，使文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。