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【題目】 書面表達(dá)（計10分）

結(jié)交朋友在校園生活中是必不可少的，學(xué)校英語社就該如何交友為話題做了一次討論。請你根據(jù)下面提供的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇英文倡議書，談?wù)勅绾谓挥选?/span>

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要求：1.包含導(dǎo)圖中的所有信息和基本結(jié)構(gòu)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.詞數(shù)80詞左右（不可超150詞），開頭和格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、班名、學(xué)校名。

My dear schoolfellows,

As we know,

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Sincerely yours,

Andy

Answer 1

【答案】

How to make friends

When many people are asked who is the most important person for them.Most of the answers are my parents,my children and so on.But don't forget that there is one kind of pepole who doesn't have direct relationship with you ,but they can also share happiness and sorrow with you!It is your friends!

Everyone needs friends,so it is very important to know how to make friends!Fristly ,we should choose the friends.We should make friends with the people who are kind and friendly.Then,we should share our happiness and sadness with our frinends.What's more ,we should try to communicate with them.Be patient and try to discuss with them! A real friend can make a big diffirence in our life , so try your best to keep your friendship go on !

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如Everyone needs friends,so it is very important to know how to make friends! Be patient and try to discuss with them! A real friend can make a big diffirence in our life , so try your best to keep your friendship go on !等等。