Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你們班輸了上周的籃球賽。Henry認為是他未能投進最后一球所造成的，有的隊友也因此而責怪他。請你寫一封英文郵件安慰他，談談你對此事的看法，并就如何取得隊友的理解提出建議。

要求：

（1）80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

（2）可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

（3）信中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名。

Dear Henry,

I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game…

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Henry,

I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself.

You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.

As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇給材料的書信作文。假如你是李華，就輸球事件安慰Henry，談談你對此事的看法，并就如何取得隊友的理解提出建議。人稱為第二人稱，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。動筆前先要注意認真閱讀材料確定寫作內容；文章必須包括要點中所給的信息，但不要逐句翻譯，補充兩條個人的觀點并提出建議。注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當發(fā)揮使行文連貫，多種句式交叉使用來豐富文章的文采。高分句型一：What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. 重要的是你應該從比賽中吸取教訓，也要從錯誤中吸取教訓。What matters is that重要的是，that引導的是表語從句。as well as常用來連接兩個并列的成分，作“也，還”講。高分句型二：And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. 你可以保證你會不遺余力地提高你的技能。that引導的是賓語從句，spare no efforts to do sth.不遺余力做某事。高分句型三：If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one. 如果大家齊心協(xié)力，你們一定會贏得下一場比賽。此句是if引導的條件狀語從句；be sure to do sth. 必定做某事。